Essay 2 (draft)
In terms of
writing, my skill has improved a lot this year. This article contains several
paragraphs that reveal this aspect.
This year
we have done a lot of work to improve our writing skills. We started by
describing the article from the Guardian, and now we can write large articles
containing 450-500 words. As for me, I found some interesting paraphrase tips
and some compelling resources for improving writing.
Also, I can
admit that despite the great work done this year, I still have several weak
points that I would like to improve in the next two years during the studying
process at NSU. Undoubtedly, more sophisticated words and constructions need to
be used in future works. In addition, I would also like to find out the topic
of plagiarism better, so that in the future I will not make the mistakes that I
previously used to do. My classmates mentioned that it would be interesting
to make out how the motivation letters and CVs are written. I can hardly
disagree with their opinion.
Regarding
the class work, I really like the way you comment and correct our drafts, so we
can rewrite some moments and fix our mistakes. Sure, blogging is much more
convenient than handwriting. This course allowed us to use modern information
technology in linguistics and expand our knowledge in this area. One of the
most interesting tasks for me was writing the final essays at the end of the
3rd semester. The topic of racism is very relevant in our time, and it was
interesting for me to write an article about this. Moreover, I liked creating
my own magazine with classmates; we support team work in our group, so it was
easy for us to split into groups. Each one did his job: someone wrote articles
in the magazine, someone conducted polls, and someone did the magazine’s cover.
Definitely, I would like to do more group work in the future.
In
conclusion, I want to say that this year was full of interesting and
fascinating works, I hope that in the 3rd year I will be able to continue
improving and sharpening my writing skills.
Hello Julia, thank you for your reflection which has given me a good idea about the aspects of the course you found useful.
ОтветитьУдалитьPleasse, consider the following:
a) This article contains several paragraphs that reveal this aspect: this is not an article but a reflection note and saying "This article contains several paragraphs that reveal this aspect" sounds really awkward, I am sorry. > I'm going how my writing has changed, focusing on the discussion of the most relevant points
would also like to
b) **find out the topic of plagiarism better > learn more about; check the examples with "find out" in the dictionary or some of the resources i've shared with your group throughout the year
I was glad to learn that you found the course useful and are willing to improve your writing skills further. Wish you good luck with this and hope you'll reach the goals you have set for yourself
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